Irie, You have chose some really intense topics. The Make a Wish foundation is a wonderful organization. However, you can not base your game on this foundation, but you can base it on the topic of children with illness. What illness did you have that caused you to have surgery? Maybe this is something that you could focus on so that you can teach people more about it. I am glad you are healthy and strong now. So what do you think about my suggestions?
I had a heart problem that caused it to fail, I would have to go to the E.R like every week even if I got a little fever they said any little thing would triger it. I think that we can make a diffrence to the kid's ou there with critical illness.
Irie,
ReplyDeleteYou have chose some really intense topics. The Make a Wish foundation is a wonderful organization. However, you can not base your game on this foundation, but you can base it on the topic of children with illness. What illness did you have that caused you to have surgery? Maybe this is something that you could focus on so that you can teach people more about it. I am glad you are healthy and strong now. So what do you think about my suggestions?
Oh, and be careful with the run-on sentences.
I had a heart problem that caused it to fail, I would have to go to the E.R like every week even if I got a little fever they said any little thing would triger it. I think that we can make a diffrence to the kid's ou there with critical illness.
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